This is a static copy of In the Rose Garden, which existed as the center of the western Utena fandom for years. Enjoy. :)

#101 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:27:05 PM

Sevelle
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . and crawls up over his body, pinning him to the floor. Ed looked into his partners eyes and noticed that Miki had a deep fire behind those beautiful blues. Suddenly Miki gripped the collar of Ed forced his tongue down his cum soaked throat, they both moaned with ecstasy and Ed . . .

Last edited by Sevelle (01-04-2007 10:31:58 PM)


sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
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#102 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:28:57 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...wig, as it was the only thing he was wearing. But this dear boy needed to be put back into his place as the ashamed, shy virgin! He played with Miki's boyhood, proceeding to use his hands to make him hard once more as he ravished the young man's mouth. He bit Miki's lips, sending the message of who was in charge here and knew what to do.

Once Miki was completely hard again, Ongaku-sensei abruptly stopped everything. He pressed himself against Miki and smirked, motionless.

After about a minute, Miki began to thrust wildly, and panted, "Please, don't stop!"

Ongaku-sensei laid his hands on Miki's shoulders, and slowly pushed him to the floor...

Last edited by A Day Without Me (01-04-2007 10:33:53 PM)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#103 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:34:21 PM

Sevelle
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(My sides hurt from the laughing!)

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sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#104 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:36:07 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

Sevelle wrote:

(My sides hurt fro mthe laughing!)

(that's not porn!)

(I think?)

(perhaps in some contexts...)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#105 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:50:06 PM

Sevelle
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . he gently placed Miki onto his stomach and he let his tongue drag down the middle of Miki's back till he reached the tight virgin hole. Miki gasped in pleasure, and Ed spoke, ‘Now you know what rimming is.’ He continued . . .

(I had to steal the line!)


sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#106 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:55:17 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...to rim Miki so effectively he probably could've rimmed the chrome off a car's bumper.

Miki, meanwhile, was making whimpering and sqeualing noises in abundance, and various other interesting, shuddery noises. He had gotten so hard by now that his erection served to keep him off the floor a little bit. Ongaku-sensei was also running his hands up and down Miki's legs, gently ghosting along.

Miki's eyes were once again closed, for he was the designated shy-ish virgin in this cheap, cheap porno. He cried out, his face pressed against the cold tiles of the castle floors.

Ongaku-sensei, at hearing this, smirked and ceased his own actions. He then gathered Miki up in his arms and stood up, intent on bringing him to a more luxurious place for this momentous occasion.

He quickly carried the still-panting Miki down one of the many hallways, and opened a door where a well furnished room lay beyond. He took Miki inside and...

(I'm leaving it up to you to erotically furnish this room, Sevelle)

(and, obviously further Miki towards devirginalization school-devil )

Last edited by A Day Without Me (01-04-2007 10:55:57 PM)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#107 | Back to Top01-04-2007 11:01:33 PM

Sevelle
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . gently set Miki down upon a plush red couch, where he knew it was time for him to enter his boy love.

Miki was ready; he took a sharp breath of pleasure as Ed dragged him across the silk couch closer to him. Ed set Miki's legs onto his shoulders, and squirted a supple amount of lube onto the relaxed virgin's hole. Miki took a gasp from the cold of the liquid, but was quitted when he was once again kissed deeply.

Ed then positioned himself to penetrate Miki, only to notice that Miki's eyes were closed. 'Look at me Miki, I want you to remember this moment forever.' He then . . .


sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#108 | Back to Top01-04-2007 11:05:20 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...slowly began to work his way into the young man. Miki was looking at Ongaku-sensei through half-lidded eyes - he couldn't help it, he couldn't fully open his eyes as he was so weighed down my lust, desire, and heat. He groaned slightly, unused to this new sensation, and, as he was a virgin, feeling a bit of pain mixed with the pleasure. But Ongaku-sensei was being gentle, going at just the right pace for him. Ongaku-sensei pushed...


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#109 | Back to Top01-04-2007 11:09:42 PM

Sevelle
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . slowly yet deeper into Miki. Miki suddenly opened his eyes wide, spread his toes as far as the stars, and moaned with pain and pleasure.

'I want you to remember this day Miki! See my face every time some guy is inside you like me,' and with that the teacher thrust as deep as he could go. Miki was mixed with pain and pleasure, his back arched as Ed began to slide in and out, simple movements.

It was all so dirty but clean, thought Miki. Ed passionately kissed Miki and forced himself deeper inside . . .


sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#110 | Back to Top01-04-2007 11:15:51 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...and Miki made even more fun noises, most of which were of the incessant moaning variety.

Miki shuddered as Ongaku-sensei kept going in and out of him. He quivered with anticipation each time Ongaku-sensei was outside of him, and moaned loudly whenever he was within him. It didn't seem like Miki could hold out much longer. When Ongaku-sensei paused at one point, Miki thrusted wildly, "Oh god, please! I want you in me!"

Ongaku-sensei pulled out some handcuffs he'd somehow been hiding, and handcuffed the young man's hands. He licked Miki's face, and said, "Tell me how much you want me."

Miki was trying very hard to keep himself from thrusting, but with little result. He managed to answer through his pants,...

(pants... as in... he's panting, not his long-abandoned pants in the hall)

(I have a feeling this is one day gonna bite me in the ass...)

Last edited by A Day Without Me (01-04-2007 11:48:32 PM)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#111 | Back to Top01-05-2007 02:24:23 AM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(I'm too aroused etc-wankdudeetc-wankdudeetc-wankdude to add to this thread for the time being but man there is NO WAY they would allow this version on Cartoon Network!)

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#112 | Back to Top01-05-2007 02:28:39 AM

ShatteredMirror
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(This is way, way, way better than anything Cartoon Network would ever show. It's like a Sensitive Pornograph DVD or something.)


Pride is not the opposite of shame, but its source.

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#113 | Back to Top01-05-2007 08:33:29 AM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(woohoo, we've turned people on! emot-dance )

(Sevelle, your ass better get back here and write the next part soon, or I'll be tempted to do so)

(why didn't we think of sex on a piano?)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#114 | Back to Top01-05-2007 06:15:03 PM

Shmeecherz
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(sorry to break the whole pattern between you two emot-keke; but here' goes)

..."I-I want you..." Miki answered in his young, breathless tone as his supple hips rolled back and forth against Ed's firm body. "I want you so badly" Ed thrust in even harder, his speed growing as his hands clawed at the young student's back. Miki blinked as to un blur his vision and he stared up at his teacher and whispered in an innocent and sweet-little-virgin-like tone. "Please...teacher...put the wig back on...It makes me so hard..." Ed...


(SO SORRY!!!emot-gonk)


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#115 | Back to Top01-05-2007 06:51:48 PM

Sevelle
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(Sorry about the leaving, and he's bald . . . ? WHAT!?)

(Rethinks post)


sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#116 | Back to Top01-05-2007 07:18:11 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(naw, he's not bald, remember he originally had the clown wig on? but he took it off)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#117 | Back to Top01-05-2007 07:29:21 PM

Sevelle
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From: Virginia the Great
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(Yeah, I suddenly remembered! Ahahaahaa . . . Anyways, I suddenly have writers block! Damn it!)


sometimes you make me feel
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"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#118 | Back to Top01-05-2007 08:21:06 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(NO!!!)

(wait, you can have writer's block in regards to cheap porn? emot-confused )


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#119 | Back to Top01-05-2007 08:39:43 PM

Sevelle
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From: Virginia the Great
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(Apparently so!)


sometimes you make me feel
like I’m living at the edge of the world
"it's just the way I smile"
you said

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#120 | Back to Top01-05-2007 08:57:39 PM

Tamago
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

If we don't get over the graphic sexual writers block we may need to skim over the rest of this scene which would be a pity as its good etc-wankdudeetc-wankgirl material.

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#121 | Back to Top01-05-2007 10:32:27 PM

Shmeecherz
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(*swoons* I am so aghast! How could anyone forget the clown wig!? It's the sexiest thing on the planet etc-wankdude!!!  It is greater than god himself! I must re-collect myself!)


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#122 | Back to Top01-05-2007 10:46:23 PM

A Day Without Me
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(wow, guess I'm gonna have to tide us over until Sevelle can form a meaningful, pornographic few sentences)

...was happy to oblige his favorite student. He pulled the wig back on, slowly and sensuously, watching as the young man struggled to keep himself from impulsively thrusting at thin air. He smiled, laying his hands on Miki once more, but he kept them still, "You still have yet to beg for me enough, Miki... am I to believe that you truly want me when you say it so little?"

Miki...


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#123 | Back to Top01-06-2007 06:52:46 AM

Tamago
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...acting like a virginal bride that he wasn't, got down to his knees in front of the pervy clown wig wearing teacher and opened his lips ever so cutely as he moved in, remembering how Kozue did it when she secretly spied on her and...

I was going to correct the grammar error but the idea that somehow Miki was turned into a girl appeals to me *hehe*
Edit: Added pic

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o50/spatulasama/mikibigems.jpg
Doesn't Miki look even more molestable than ever now?

Last edited by Tamago (01-06-2007 08:40:50 AM)

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#124 | Back to Top01-06-2007 08:28:37 AM

Shmeecherz
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(she? SHE watched Kozue!? AAAAH! Miki got a sex change! Oh dear!)

...stuck out his small pink tongue and, very gently, licked up the shaft of Ed's throbbing manhood. The young boy was starting to feel great lust for this man, and he quickly began to pleasure himself as he was licking and smothering the teachers hard length with his lips and tongue...


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#125 | Back to Top01-06-2007 11:06:10 AM

Shmeecherz
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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(haha! Enguarde Tamago!)

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b290/shmeecherz/masturmiki.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b290/shmeecherz/mikiedshowerblow.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b290/shmeecherz/sexonbedmikied.jpg


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