This is a static copy of In the Rose Garden, which existed as the center of the western Utena fandom for years. Enjoy. :)

#76 | Back to Top01-04-2007 02:46:27 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . Anthy blew up in a million pieces, but like everyone else could had suspected Anthy was unholy and unstoppable, so she reformed much like that guy in that movie with Arnold Swir-shi-what's-it. Anthy then lifted her right hand up high and called upon the powers of her . . .


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#77 | Back to Top01-04-2007 03:07:55 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

....fairy godmother who helped Anthy by bathing her in a blue glow as it irradiated her with gamma particles which caused her to grow bigger, stronger, greener and bouncier than she has ever been before.  Kozue was seriously pissed off that Anthy scored herself a hot bod like that so she grabbed another of those grenades and....

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#78 | Back to Top01-04-2007 03:16:15 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . it accidentally blew up in her hand, Kozue was left a charred circle. The fairy godmother saw this and was greatly saddened. But like Anthy and Akio she was evil, evil to the max because she was the same fairy godmother from Shrek 2, and concocted a plan and resurrected Kozue for . . .


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#79 | Back to Top01-04-2007 03:20:29 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...55,000 euros. Kozue, now in one form, went off and sexually blackmailed one of her former lovers (reportedly a teacher) for the money. She then decided to become a duelist so she could get her brother back. In the meantime, she would simply have to go to Miki-look-alikes for her incestuous needs. This upset...


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#80 | Back to Top01-04-2007 03:50:43 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...the censors as all this immoral activity been displayed in the first episode alone has really riled them up so much that they placed a subpoena on the show to...

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#81 | Back to Top01-04-2007 03:56:28 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...appear in court and explain why it was trying to corrupt the children so much.

In response, Kozue sent a picture of herself giving the middle finger, nude, to the judicial officials involved.

Meanwhile, in the castle of eternity...

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I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#82 | Back to Top01-04-2007 04:27:41 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

....He-Man walked in and wondered what the hell was going on as everything seemed to be upside down as he mistaken the Castle of Eternity for the Castle of Eternia (A simple mistake to make I am sure emot-tongue ).  He struted up to Dios who was playing his favourite Sim-dating game on his PSP when he noticed the muscle man in what appeared to be kinky leather gear walking up to him and asked him a question....

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#83 | Back to Top01-04-2007 05:55:46 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

..."Have you seen my PS3? I seem to have unfortunately misplaced it."

Meanwhile, Miki was, sadly, trying to escape the perverted music teacher, who for some reason was also in the castle of eternity. The music teacher (who we'll call Ongaku-sensei for simplicity's sake) pursued the poor boy through the many corridors of the castle. And suddenly, Miki sadly found himself at a dead end! He turned around in a panicked state and...

(ok, I'll admit it - I've always kind of wanted to read a fic wherein the music teacher gets what he wants >.>)


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I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#84 | Back to Top01-04-2007 06:08:24 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

....saw to his horror, his teacher wearing nothing but a clown wig and an evil smile.  "What are you gonna do Ongaku-sensei?" Miki asked nervously as he found himself against the wall with nowhere to run and an ugly pervert ready to molest his young supple body hoping against hope that someone will save him from....

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#85 | Back to Top01-04-2007 06:23:13 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...the horror of carnal knowledge of his music teacher. Ongaku-sensei laid his hand on Miki's soft, young cheek, as Miki blushed ashamedly and looked away, "I promise to be gentle." Ongaku-sensei...

(come on, you know you wanna make this like a bad porno - this is in the IFD section after all!)

(I'm going to hell for stuff like this)

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I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#86 | Back to Top01-04-2007 07:51:28 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

....began to unbutton Miki's uniform as he stood there like a dear caught in a car's headlights while the perverted teacher breathed heavily down on Miki's face....

A Day Without Me wrote:

(come on, you know you wanna make this like a bad porno - this is in the IFD section after all!)

Well the Akio part of us forum members would delight with glee at having Miki deflowered as it were.

(I'm going to hell for stuff like this)

We are going to hell just being in this forum so why worry?

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#87 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:07:06 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...while Miki shuddered at his teacher's touch. The man smelled faintly of lavender. Although Miki could've escaped if he really wished to, he somehow couldn't bring himself to move. His uniform shirt fell to the floor softly, and...

(of course, if this is to be a bad porno, it means Miki'll end up actually enjoying himself school-devil )

(I feel so dirty emot-gonk )

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I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#88 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:21:30 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...began to crawl across the floor, climbing up the music teacher (whose name was Ed Ongaku-sensei, coincidentally) and reaching its horrid armless sleeves toward his neck. Ed scrambled and fought, and Miki stood transfixed as his ambulatory shirt strangled the life from poor Ed, leaving him dead as a doornail. After it was all over, the shirt crawled towards Miki, perking its collar up like a dog trying to understand its master's frantic motions, and Miki blinked three times and said...

(sorry dudes... I had a mental picture I couldn't resist. If you want me to delete it, I will)


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#89 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:30:32 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

(it's ok, I understand - it was humorous, I'll grant you that emot-smile )

..."I must be dreaming!"

And that he was! He shook his head, and the strange hallucination was gone, replaced with Ed Ongaku-sensei slowly undressing him. Miki...


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#90 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:40:10 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . gasped as the teacher stuck his cold clammy hands down his pants, which strangely were tighter than they normally were, well unless he was near Anthy or . . .

(Yeah, already have my one way ticket to hell)


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#91 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:44:52 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...his sister, oddly enough. Ongaku-sensei extricated one of his hands from Miki's pants, and slowly unzipped the zipper on his pants, slowly enough so that every individual zip on the zipper made an audible noise, much like Miki's breathing was at the moment. Ongaku-sensei delicately...

(YES! porno by committee! emot-dance )

(if anyone is thinking of suddenly turning this innocuous - DON'T YOU DARE!)

(oh my lords, I am going to hell on the Hell Express Train)


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#92 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:50:54 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . turned on his Boom Box to that strange seventies porn tape he got from a silver-haired man in a red car. Miki gasped again as the teacher . . .

(What chyou talkin' 'bout?! I'm the damn conductor!)


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#93 | Back to Top01-04-2007 08:58:14 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...finally completely undid Miki's pants and let the clothing item crumple to the floor. Miki stood there in nothing but his teddy bear boxers, knowing on some level that he should've felt cold, but could only manage to feel a searing heat engulfing him.

Ongaku-sensei now lowered his face to Miki's, and proceeded to kiss him lightly. He then moved to his neck, and began to kiss him up and down his neck, kisses that morphed into Ongaku-sensei sucking his neck. Miki blushed like a young virgin in a bad hentai OVA, and bit his lip, struggling to keep from moaning. His breath quickened as...

(oo, oo, can I be the ticket collector?! emot-dance )


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#94 | Back to Top01-04-2007 09:01:41 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . the teacher slipped his now warm hands into the boxers, creating a firm grip on Miki's (Well let's say for the sake of the story) strangely large manhood.

'What the fuck to you feed that thing!?' shrieked the teacher in pleasure.

Miki replied, ' . . .


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#95 | Back to Top01-04-2007 09:06:19 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

..., but not really to the stated question, "Ongaku-sensei! *pantpant* Please don't! *gasp, labored breathing*"

Ongaku-sensei began to slowly stroke Miki's manhood (err, or boyhood in this case -_-;), as the boy arched his back and gave a breathless gasp. Ongaku-sensei, the busy man that he was, now expertly covered Miki's mouth with his own and deftly slipped his tongue in. Miki closed his eyes, burning in a mix of shame and arousment (Miki, not his eyes), whilst Ongaku-sensei continued to...

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My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
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#96 | Back to Top01-04-2007 09:18:20 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . stroke his boyhood, then he stopped, forcing Miki to gasp as hard as ever with a look of don't stop. Ed then knelt of his knees and slid the boxers down revealing Miki's nine inches of pure love. Ed grasped hold of Miki and took him into his mouth and . . .

(Miki doesn't normally get any loven, so I had to give him something to be proud about.)


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#97 | Back to Top01-04-2007 09:36:30 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...began to gently lavish his tongue on Miki's boyhood. Miki's knees locked, and he finally let loose a deep moan. He wrapped his arms around himself, digging his nails into his own flesh, biting down on his lip hard enough to draw blood. Ongaku-sensei smiled into Miki's erection as he continued to move his mouth up and down, pleased with Miki's reaction. Miki...


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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#98 | Back to Top01-04-2007 09:51:47 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

. . . unleashed himself and placed his two hands firmly on Ed's head, controlling the speed of his motions. 'That's right bitch! Suck it!' Miki turned bright red from embarrassment for he had let go of the emotional shield he had put up for so long, 'Sorry Ongaku-Sensei . . . I don't know what came over me.'

Ed then . . .

(Cheap porno's)


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#99 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:19:29 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...coughed and spluttered because Miki had shot off in his mouth, and he wasn't expecting such a large load. As he let the oversized boyhood slip from his mouth, he was surprised to get another jet in the face, because bukkake is sexy. Miki...


Pride is not the opposite of shame, but its source.

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#100 | Back to Top01-04-2007 10:25:49 PM

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Re: Let’s rewrite SKU one incomplete paragraph at a time.

...smirked a bit. But this dear boy needed to be put back into his place as the ashamed, shy virgin! He nipped lightly at Miki's boyhood, and Miki gasped once more, his eyes shutting once more as he threw his head back and panted. As Ongaku-sensei further worked on him, Miki thrust out of sheer animalistic impulse, and grew even harder than he had previously been. Ongaku-sensei stopped, not wanting to completely bring him off before getting to completely deflower the boy. He removed his mouth from Miki's boyhood, and waited a moment.

"Oh, please!" Miki panted, thrusting on impulse again, "Don't stop!"

Ongaku-sensei laid his hands on Miki's shoulders, and slowly pushed him to the floor...


"I'm bringing paxil back. (Yup)
My HMO might just pick up the tab. (Yup)
I got the tremors and I need a nap. (Yup)
I gave my rent check to them Pfizer cats."

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