This is a static copy of In the Rose Garden, which existed as the center of the western Utena fandom for years. Enjoy. :)
#1 | Back to Top03-26-2009 04:08:28 PM
One Sentence Script: The Blue Mark.
This is an experiment I hope will get your creative juices flowing. The idea is that each of us enter one line and if you feel its needed, a discription of what is happening oncluding what a character does before or after they say their line.
While you can add pure randomness to this script (if you cant think of anything to add to the plot), if you do help keep some semblance of a plot on track, all the better.
Also if you want to change the scene, start with ---- first.
Remember you can only do one of 4 things:
1/ *ACTIONS and/or VISUALS*
2/ Character: "Their Line (No more than 60 words ideally)" (EMOTION)
3/ *ACTIONS and/or VISUALS* and then Character: "Their Line, no more than 60 words." (EMOTION)
4/ Character: "Their Line, no more than 60 words." (EMOTION)and then *ACTIONS and/or VISUALS*
I will get the ball rolling.
STORY TITLE: The Blue Mark.
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*Sunny Sunday morning; inside a bathroom; a young girl walks in after the reconnmended time to check the results of a pregnancy test; she picks it up.*
GIRL: "Oh Crap, a blue mark, what the hell am I supposed to do now, I am much too young to have a baby." (WORRIED)
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#2 | Back to Top03-26-2009 04:13:00 PM
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*Dios walks into the bathroom and holds up his hand*
DIOS: "Young girl, that child in your belly is my successor who will save my sister from my evil half. You must not abort it at any cost!" (SMUG)
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#6 | Back to Top03-26-2009 04:28:27 PM
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DIOS: "Your child will be given my power. With it, the child will take part in the duels my evil half is holding, win, beat my evil half, and those saving my sister from him." (EXCITED)
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#8 | Back to Top03-26-2009 04:35:58 PM
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DIOS: "Actually, I've looked into the future and your child is going to be a girl, but that's OK since my sister will love her just the same. And I would do it myself, but my power is sealed away and it's only a coincident I'm here right now." (SWEAT DROP)
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#13 | Back to Top03-26-2009 06:29:25 PM
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AUDIENCE: "!!!" *DISBELIEF*
Roses have thorns to stop those who would dare deny their right to live.
Razara's Postulate: For every lover of lesbians out there, there is an equal and opposite attraction to Dippin' Dots.
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#15 | Back to Top03-26-2009 07:08:49 PM
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*Nine months later, the girl is in the hospital giving birth to her baby, which we all know as Utena.*
GIRL: AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! (IN PAIN)
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#18 | Back to Top03-26-2009 07:33:32 PM
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Re: One Sentence Script: The Blue Mark.
AUDIENCE: "???" *DISBELIEF*
Roses have thorns to stop those who would dare deny their right to live.
Razara's Postulate: For every lover of lesbians out there, there is an equal and opposite attraction to Dippin' Dots.
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#20 | Back to Top03-26-2009 07:55:12 PM
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UTENA: "Waaaaaaaaaaa~" (ANGRY?)
hm. i'm... here again? catch me in the discord-- im fairybull
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#22 | Back to Top03-26-2009 09:26:01 PM
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DOCTOR: "According to my science journals, pink hair is caused by pregnant mothers who chewed way too much bubblegum." (SERIOUS)
*The sound of numerous sweatdrops hitting the floor could be heard.*
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#24 | Back to Top03-26-2009 09:36:41 PM
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DOCTOR: "It could be worse, you could have a boy with pink hair, he would get nullied at school, become cold and interlectual and end up killing a whole lot of students for some bizaar ritual. (UNKNOWINGLY FORESHADOWING)
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