Because of my poor English I find translating EXTREMEEEEELY HARD, and writing fanfic in English is almost impossible , but I want to share my fanfic with you guys, thus I translate the simplest chapter of my Touga/Saionji fanfic.
Please tell me if there is grammar mistake or this chapter is hard to understand.

The original Chinese version:
http://ae890624.spaces.live.com/blog/cn … 1299.entry

Sweet life 4: vampire
2008.3.14

   Saionji frowned and looked at Touga, with tears in his eyes.
   Putting the chopsticks aside, Touga approached him, "You bit your lip?"
   "Mmm."
   So pitiful his face.
   Licked Saionji's wound. "Why do your blood even taste better than my cooking?" licking his own lips.
   "You vampire!"

   "Help me, Touga!!! How should I make up the ad of my new product!!!!"
   Putting the rumbling mobile a metre away from himself, Touga could still hear.
   "Then, what do you want from me?"
   "A good idea."
   "You know I AM not an adman."
   "Ah~~ Anyway I HIRE you as the model of this ad, YOU decide the way of performance. I only want a good result!"

   A few nurses surronded the television, with their eyes shining.
   "This vampire's red hair is gorgeous!"
   "Ah-- Both Vampire and Doctor Saionji are the best!"
   "I won't go to the blood donation centre anymore! Vampire-sama~"
   Saionji stared at the TV -- Isn't that the vampire of HIS home?

Last edited by ayla (03-25-2008 11:57:00 AM)