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#1 | Back to Top05-21-2015 04:20:16 PM

Yams
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From: Crystal Millenium
Registered: 02-13-2007
Posts: 963

Beta my short story?

I thought I'd ask around here since I know some of you guys are writers; I have this short story that needs beta-ing, its 10 pages long, sort of a subverted fairytale thingie. Can anyone be my beta readet? I'd be happy with just one or two people. I'd  just like a fresh pair of eyes to catch any silly mistakes and also an overall opinion on the story's characters and themes. I can beta something you've written in return, I've done a lot of reviewing/editing in my day. Alternatively, I can draw you a little chibi of your Oc or fanart of you fave character. emot-biggrin just a thank you & to give something in return. etc-love

EDIT: Apologies for shit-ton of typos, I'm on my old tablet amd it makes typing a chore.

Last edited by YamPuff (05-21-2015 04:21:40 PM)


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#2 | Back to Top05-22-2015 07:31:07 PM

Yasha
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From: Edmonton, AB, Canada
Registered: 10-15-2006
Posts: 6018
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Re: Beta my short story?

I can get this done at work tomorrow between customers. How hard do you want me to be on it? I'm not mean, but my default setting is pretty nitpicky and that can be overwhelming.


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#3 | Back to Top05-23-2015 07:13:02 AM

Yams
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From: Crystal Millenium
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Posts: 963

Re: Beta my short story?

Yasha wrote:

I can get this done at work tomorrow between customers. How hard do you want me to be on it? I'm not mean, but my default setting is pretty nitpicky and that can be overwhelming.

Really? emot-aaa

Let me PM it to you and feel free to let me know your honest opinion. Go wild. The truth is, I'd like to legitimately get a constructive idea about my work. I decided to ask here instead of on my DevArt because although I could get plenty of readers to volunteer, my followers are just sweethearts and wouldn't necessarily be...ah...brutally honest.


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#4 | Back to Top05-24-2015 10:49:49 PM

Yasha
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Re: Beta my short story?

PM sent back. Sorry, I got caught up giving relationship advice at work yesterday and didn't get to read the story until now.


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#5 | Back to Top05-25-2015 02:54:51 AM

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From: Crystal Millenium
Registered: 02-13-2007
Posts: 963

Re: Beta my short story?

Yasha wrote:

PM sent back. Sorry, I got caught up giving relationship advice at work yesterday and didn't get to read the story until now.

Heh, relationship advice is much more important than my little story. XD
Again thanks sooo much! Very appreciated. etc-love


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#6 | Back to Top05-25-2015 12:33:45 PM

mistspinner
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Registered: 08-10-2013
Posts: 92

Re: Beta my short story?

Possibly off-topic, but we should set up a thread for these sorts of exchanges! I'm sure lots of use are writers here, so there'd be more than enough demand/supply emot-keke;

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#7 | Back to Top05-25-2015 12:57:59 PM

satyreyes
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From: New Orleans, Louisiana
Registered: 10-16-2006
Posts: 10328
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Re: Beta my short story?

Sounds like a good idea!  Do you want to get it started? emot-smile

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#8 | Back to Top05-26-2015 06:40:39 AM

mistspinner
Ohtori Paramouri
Registered: 08-10-2013
Posts: 92

Re: Beta my short story?

I can do that! Or someone else can because I'm currently drowning in finals D:

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#9 | Back to Top05-26-2015 03:49:57 PM

Yams
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From: Crystal Millenium
Registered: 02-13-2007
Posts: 963

Re: Beta my short story?

I'll make one now. emot-smile


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